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« Thread Started on Sept 26, 2005, 5:22pm » | |
This a synopsis before the story (I have to piece together what to type  )
It has been 4 years since Takuya, Koji, Zoe, J.P., Tommy, and Kouichi helped the 10 legendary warriors defeat the evil Lucemon. But know they have been called backed to the Digital World when they hear of a new enemy that not only threatens the Digital World, but has killed Agunimon, Lobomon, Kazemon, Beetlemon, Kumamon, and Loweemon. Now that they have returned, the must work with the other 4 warriors; Mercuremon, Ranamon, Grumblemon, and Arbormon. The three celestial Digimon: Cherubimon, Ophanimon, and Seraphimon, assigns them(along with Bokomon and Neemon of course) to head deep inside an enchanted forest hidden from all and search for help. Though they don't know what they are supposed to look for, our 12 heroes head into the Great Enchanted Wood to look for the help they need to stop this new evil and save the Digital World.
Little did they know that evil follows them, even when they least expect it........
How's that? I hope all of you like it!!! 
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« Reply #1 on Sept 26, 2005, 5:54pm » | |
Spirits can't die.
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« Reply #2 on Sept 26, 2005, 8:03pm » | |
yes they can...kills mgal;anmon's spirit...HA TOLD YOU...lol
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« Reply #3 on Sept 27, 2005, 4:18pm » | |
No that's not what I meant.....
They were attacked without warning, and with the last of they're strength and sent the three celestial Digimon their spirits to give to the kids. Sorry, I left that part out....MY BAD!! 
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« Reply #4 on Sept 29, 2005, 3:51pm » | |
I'm working on the first chapter, it's almost done. I'll post it when I'm done, I even made a cover.....but I don't know if I can post it, but I'll try..
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« Reply #5 on Sept 29, 2005, 4:01pm » | |
i know they rock like cheeze *puts ahnds up in the air holding cheeze*(i also added music to the forum ^_^)
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« Reply #6 on Sept 29, 2005, 6:05pm » | |
Chapter 1: The Great Enchanted Wood
"I've never seen a forest this huge in my entire life!" said J.P. as he walked next to Tommy and Neemon. Koji and Kouichi nodded in agreement. Zoe looked at a tree and said, "It's also the most beautiful, look at all these flowers!" "I should come here more often when I have a bad day, it's so pretty..." Ranamon said as she began to go into a reverie..As the twelve of them walked down the path, Takuya asked, "How much further do we have to go?" Bokomon had a frown on his face and said, "I'm afraid I don't know. Mercuremon, do you know?" "Sadly, neither do I. But I have a feeling we'll run into wherever or whatever we are supposed to look for." Mercuremon replied. "I wonder what we'll run into if we keep going this way...." Tommy said to Kouichi. "Maybe a restraunt with some really good food..." J.P. said with a ravenous hunger look on his face. "Is food all you ever think about, J.P.?" Koji asked. "I hope we don't find a restraunt, remember what happened when we're heading to the Forest Terminal and stopped at that restraunt four years ago?" Zoe said with a sarcastic voice. "Ugh, don't remind me...." J.P. said.
The further down they went, the thicker the forest grew, as it was also getting dark. "I think we should stop for the night, it's getting late." Kouichi said looking around. "Yeah, I think you're right. We can keep going tomorrow, if that's all right with everyone?" said Takuya. "I'm fine with that," answered Ranamon. "Yeah, that sounds like a good idea," said Koji. " Same here, I'm bushed!" said J.P. Everyone agreed to stop for the night. After getting the fire started, Ranamon voluntered to cook dinner. "You cook?" asked Takuya. "Of course, how do you expect these two to stay as big as they are?" asked Ranamon, as she pointed at Arbormon and Grumblemon. " So you can cook them once they're bigger than Whamon?" Mercuremon asked sarcasticly. "Nah, because she's the best cook there is!" Arbormon replied.
He was right. She made a meat apple soup with certain spices she found in the forest. " That was the best thing I had ever tasted!" said Zoe after finishing the soup. " Thank you, it's an old recipie of mine." Ranamon replied. " You need to come over to my house when my mom fixes meatloaf. She always burns it and we have to eat pizza, and I'm getting tired of it....." said Takuya, slurping his soup. "You go through us first to get to her." Grumblemon said after gulping his. After everyone finished, Tommy asked, " Hey J.P., can you do some magic tricks like you used to?" " Yeah, if you guys don't mind?" J.P. replied. " I don't mind." Mercuremon said. " Neither do I, go for it!" said Takuya.
First, J.P. did his hankerchief trick, which got Arbormon to asking, " How the heck did you that?" " Oh suga, don't you know? A magician never reveals his secrets!" reaplied Ranamon. Arbormon seemed disappointed, but countinued to watch J.P. After being "dazzled" by J.P.'s tricks, everyone told stories about what had happened to them the past four years. Takuya, Zoe, Koji, and Kouichi were in the 10th grade, Tommy was in 7th, and J.P. was in 11th. Takuya told them about him bonding with his family and being one of the best soccer players on his team, Zoe talked about all her new friends and being on the cheerleading squad, Tommy and J.P. talked being the smartest kids in their classes, Koji bonding with his stepmom and real mom, and Kouichi talked about getting to know more about his dad and his brother. Then, Bokomon told everyone about his book being published and decided to write a sequal about this adventure. Mercuremon talked about him opening a library with Bokomon and Neemon's help, Ranamon discussed her dream of opening a 5-star restraunt and offered them free food, Arbormon told everyone about working with the Burgermon in Hambuger Village, and Grumblemon told them about him doing a bit of construction work.
After talking and laughing, Takuya had a worried look on his face. " You seem sad...." said Neemon. "Yeah, somethin' wrong?" asked Ranamon. Takuya looked at Mercuremon, and asked, " Who is this new enemy we're up against?" There was a silence for a couple minutes, and then Neemon started to hum, but Bokomon elbowed him to stop. Then Mercuremon said with a sadness in his voice, " These new villians have caused more trouble than all four of us, plus Lucemon, put together four years ago." There was another silence, but then he replied, " They call themselves the Dark Sages, and from what I heard, this group consists of five Digimon. One much more evil and powerul than the other." " Those goons are ruining this world....I'd give anything to punch their lights out and make them pay for what they did!" Ranamon said, cluching her fists. " It's okay, Ranamon. We all want to...." Arbormon said, conforting her.
" Well whoever they are, we'll take them down like we did Lucemon!!" Takuya said with an independent voice. " Yeah, we'll help stop them!" Zoe replied. Koji, Kouichi, J.P., and Tommy nodded with agreement. Then their confidence was interupted by Grumblemon sighing a sad tone. " That," Mercuremon said, " was what Agunimon said, and the others agreed. They had the courage to stand up to them,............and the result......" he stopped and looked at the ground. Koji stood up and said angrily, "Where were you when it happened, you could have helped?! Why didn't you..." he was enterupted when Mercuremon brought his hand up to let him explain. " We would have helped, but........they wouldn't let us....I have a bad feeling that this is what they wanted....." " What? To die!" J.P. said sadly. " No, they wanted you to fullfill the duty they were given. And I have a feeling they wanted us to aid you." replied Mercuremon. " Try to understand, kids. We would have prevented this from happening by helping them, but....." Ranamon started, but she began to sob. " It's okay, we understand." Kouichi said, patting her on the back.
Takuya pulled out his D-tector, stared at it, then stood up and said, " I promise you guys, we won't let you down. I swear on these spirits that we will defeat the Dark Sages, no matter what!!!" Arbormon and Grumblemon stood up, then Arbormon said, " That's the spirit!" " We let them have it, good!" Grumblemon said, smiling. Ranamon nodded with approvall, her red eyes shimering with tears. Mercuremon and Bokomon smiled. The others stood up and everyone said, " YEAH!!!!!" Arbormon looked around and said, " Well, we better hit the sack." " Yes," Bokomon said as he started to yawn, " we have a long day ahead of us tomorrow." Everyone said good night,, while Grumblemon and Mercuremon stood watch.
Meanwhile, in another part of the Digital World, a dark figure says, " Have all the confidence in the world if you want, but that won't save you from your fate....." The figure started to laugh, along with other dark figures joining him.
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« Reply #7 on Sept 29, 2005, 7:35pm » | |
...it is better than mine...lol
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« Reply #8 on Oct 3, 2005, 3:31pm » | |
Are you just saying that?
I feel really proud of it, it's the best work I've done besides poetry.
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« Reply #9 on Oct 3, 2005, 4:59pm » | |
im not just saying that...there is hardly any messed up grammar or mistakes...unlike mine (becouse mine has alot of grammar and mistakes i think)
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« Reply #10 on Oct 8, 2005, 2:31pm » | |
Thank You. 
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« Reply #11 on Oct 8, 2005, 2:49pm » | |
that just reminded me to get started on my fanfic
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« Reply #12 on Oct 25, 2005, 6:18pm » | |
Chapter 2: The Castle Within
As soon as everyone woke up, they prepared to leave and head deeper inside the forest. While gathering their stuff, Koji stood still for a moment. " Something wrong, Koji?" Zoe asked. He paused, then asked, " Do you get the feeling we're being watched?" " All the time, kid." Arbormon said. " No seriously, I think we're being watched." Koji replied. " Just in case we are, we should keep our guard up at all times. Anyone could be watching, even the Dark Sages." Mercuremon said. " Sheesh, now I feel safer than ever......" Takuya said sarcasticly. " Got that right." said Koji.
Meanwhile, in the darkest part of the Digital World, Piedmon stands watching a crystal sphere. " They are aware of our presence, Piedmon. What shall we do now?" asked Myotismon. MetalEtemon stands up and says, " Lets just beat them down already, they don't stand a chance against us!!!" " We can't just barge in, we must be patient and plan cautiously." said Lilithmon, standing in the shadows. " Look here, woman. The longer we wait, the more impatient we will all get and go insane. And I need a new punching bag....unless you want to volunteer." MetalEtemon said. " You forget who is stronger than you. Besides your physical ability, I am far more powerful when it comes.....(clears her throut)mental abilities." Lilithmon said, with a sinister voice. His face grew red and he said angrily, " Oh yeah you self-centered witch!!! Just cause you've got looks doesn't mean I can't kick your girly butt!!" As they were arguing, MarineDevimon was standing and looking at the crystal sphere as well, but he was only looking at Ranamon and had an evil smile on his face.
" Enough, Lilithmon is right...." Piedmon said. As Lilithmon was about to say something, he then said, "As is Myotismon and, sadly, MetalEtemon. We do need to be patient but now that they are aware, we must act now. Not to mention they are almost at the castle within the forest, and she will help them if the prophecy is true. Come, we must head to the Great Enchanted Wood and become....aquainted with our new friends." With evil smiles on their face, they took off .
While walking, the forest became so thick, the path almost vanished. " Something feels strange.....as if the trees are getting thicker for a reason..." Mercuremon concluded. " Duh, metalhead!!" Ranamon said, " The forest is supposed to get thick, we must be in the center of this place!!" Bokomon shook his head, " No, he's right. It's as if the forest......" he stopped and looked around. Then Tommy asked, " As if the forest is what, Bokomon?" Bokomon looked forward and said, " As if the forest is hiding something...." Kouichi looked around and said," Hiding what?" Then Zoe said, " I wonder......" She then sprinted and ran ahead. " Zoe!!! Where ya goin'?" asked Arbormon. But she was too far ahead for her to hear him.
After running what seemed like an hour she came to a complete stop, and looked up, speechless. After the others caught up, Ranamon asked, " Why did you run, Zo...." she looked up. "Yeah, how come....." before Takuya could finish, he looked up with everyone else. There, right in front of them was large stone castle. It was very old, yet beautiful with its long vines decorated with large, different colored blossoms. " Pretty....." Neemon said. " You said it...." J.P. replied. " I had a feeling there was one here. Like how Seraphimon's castle was hidden in the Forest Terminal...." Zoe explained. " You think this where we supposed to go?" asked Grumblemon. Takuya walked to the wooden door and said, " One way to find out..."
Just as he was about to knock, the door suddenly opened. Then out of no where, a cute witch like Digimon jumped out from inside with an angry look on her face and said, pointing her celestial wand at them, "Who are you? What do you want?!"
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« Reply #13 on Oct 26, 2005, 9:19pm » | |
cool....i liek da story....i dont know why,,,but im still planning for what is next on my fan-fic....
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« Reply #14 on Oct 30, 2005, 4:02pm » | |
I haven't started with Chapter 3, but I'll get to it in 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,(and so on) years. 
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